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End of Ch 1...Short Story R&R....need feedback....

  • 10/25/06 4:38 pm
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“Why?” she asked with curiosity. She had noticed that it had been her he was staring at. When he noticed she was looking at him as well they both turned their gazes somewhere else.
“He’s Steven Hawthorne, he has this creepy attitude towards people. He hardly ever talks and worst of all he happens to live at the Reverie Walters Estate.” answered Katherine.
“The estate happens to be owned by one of the richest men in the state, Edmund Walters. He’s Steven’s uncle. Anyways this man is beyond creepy, he works as a vet right. Even though he doesn’t need the money. The weird thing is that he happens to not talk to anybody outside his practice, his place of work. And Steven acts the same.” continued Aimee.
“Waste of good looks if you ask me.” Katherine said after a while of silence. When they turned back around he was gone.
“How weird. I don’t understand why someone would act that way.” Isabella stated.
“Well even the estate gives you this negative vibe.” replied Aimee.
Suddenly the bell rang and they knew it was time to head to class. They girls walked slowly to their fifth period.
As Isabella reached the door to her next class she asked the other two girls.
“Why don’t you guys come over tonight. We can watch a movie.”
“Sure I can make it, how about you Aimee.” Katherine replied.
“I’ll see if I can hang out after work.” answered Aimee.
“Ok. I’ll see you later then.” Isabella said while opening the door. She walked in and sat down in one of the empty chairs. She was looking forward to this class, English, which was one of her favorite subjects. The seat next to her was the only seat available after a few minutes. Of course no one wanted to seat next to the new girl. The last bell rang and at the last minute Steven walked in.
“It’s nice to know you’re willing to join us Mr. Hawthorne.” The teacher said briskly. “Now will the rest of you pleas open up your notebooks for a short assignment.”
Steven looked around for an empty seat, noticed the one next to Isabella and started to head towards it. Isabella had been staring at him and reached for her book-bag and reached in taking out her notebook in a hurry so that she would look busy when he sat down. But as she searched for her pen she realized that it was gone. She had nothing to write with. She searched intensely one more time in vain. She let out a small sigh of distress.
“Here you can borrow one mines.” A deep handsome voice came from nowhere. She looked up to see Steven holding out a pen towards her.
“Thank you.” She said with a faint smile. Steven shrugged and turned his attention to his work. They paid little attention to each other for the rest of the class.
When the bell that let them out for the rest of the day rung Isabella put her stuff away in her bag and turned to face Steven.
“Here's your pen, thanks for letting me use it.” she said as she gave the pen back to Steven.
“Don’t worry about it,” he said without reaching for it. “I have plenty. You can keep it as your emergency pen.” He got up and walked away out the door. Isabella just stared at the pen and then picked up her bag. With a sigh she walked out of the classroom an into the empty hallway. Her father was waiting for her. When she went inside he asked, “So how was your day.”
Her only response, “Hectic, my day was very hectic.”.


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  • 10/25/06 3:46 am
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The season of the year between summer and winter,
lasting from the autumnal equinox to the winter solstice
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The lunch bell rang and everyone hurried off to enjoy their break. Isabella slowly put her stuff into her book bag and got up from her desk. As she walked to the door she noticed that she wasn't alone in the room. A young man was putting away his things. He wasn't at all bad looking, quite the opposite. He was well built and had dark hair and brown eyes. She couldn't believe she hadn't noticed him before but thought nothing of it and walked out the door.
She walked down the corridors in search of the cafeteria. She stopped only for a second to ask for directions and headed on through the school. When she finally found the cafeteria she was a little tired. She walked through the large oak doors and found Katherine sitting impatiently at one of the tables.
"There you are! I was worried! I'm supposed to be taking care of you remember!" Katherine exclaimed.
"I'm sorry! I got a little lost." was Isabella's only reply.
"It doesn't matter now," Katherine replied a little calmer, "This is Aimee by the way Amy Goodwin." She said pointing to the girl next to her.
"Nice meeting you." Aimee said with a warm smile.
"Come one Isabella, Channer wanted us to show you around school, but we're going to show you the things that really matter." Katherine suddenly stated. "We're going to show how to survive in this jungle."
The girls walked around the campus with Katherine explaining where Isabella should avoid going, what bathrooms she should avoid using, and who the cliques were. Katherine would poke fun of some of the cliques and Aimee would shake her head in disagreement. Isabella started to ignore a little what the other girls said and looked around the dark hallways. Even though sunlight could easily enter the halls it seemed like there were curtains along side the baloneys that prevented it from doing so. It scared her out a little. She was still unsure of some of the choices her parents made when moving to Salem. Isabella suddenly looked up when she felt someone's eyes staring at her.
"Oh great, we had to meet up with Mr. Creepy." Katherine suddenly whispered. Obviously she didn?t want to be heard. "That guy you should always avoid, people say he's into satanic stuff."
Isabella looked around for who she was talking about but only saw the young man from her history class.

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  • 10/20/06 5:25 am
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[font=courier new][color="#6170B2"] Dominique is driving me insane, my so called best friend is in the habit of making me go crazy everyday. She does stupid things that she knows gets on my nerves. Then she acts like she hasn't done anything wrong and that she's the victim. I mean why! She's too overdramatic about everything!
Here's what happened. I got out of my last class for the day and went to the school's cafe because I always go over there to wait with her as long as I can because she has to wait for her dad to pick her up. I get there and sit down at the emty chair next to her and she tells me to move cuz some guy was sitting there before. So I try to talk to her and she totally ignores me and starts playing with someones nintendo gs. So I laught and ask her if she wasn't just a little too old to be playing video games. She just shrugs and continues to ignore me. Well I wasn't just going to sit there and do nothing. Our other friend Amani and I went to go use the computers and were just checking stuff out. I found this really dumb icon and called Dominique to come see it and she just ignored me because the guy she was talking about came back. So I was like screw it. I told Amani I was going to go home and I told Dom to at the very least drop us off at the bus stop and she started whyning. So I took her cellphone playfully and said that she would only get back if she walked with us and wen down stairs. She ran after us and then started bitching about he she left that guy she doesnt even know by himself so I was like fine go hang out with him I'll just stay by myself. i told her if she didn't want me to stay with her in the first place she should have just told me so I could've gone home instead of wasting my time. She just rolled her eyes and started to walk away. I just turned around and said fine, I see how much our friendship means to you know, choosing a guy you don't even know over me.
The worst part is tommorow she'll make it look like it's my fault and that I was the one being the bitch...or make some stupid excuse like it's because I was on my rag...whats if even worse is that I know she was doing it out of revenge cuz I went home early yesterday instead of waiting with her. I was freaking sick yesterday and I told her. I also apoligized for not being able to control my immune system. AGh....later she's going to apoligize and try to buy me off...maybe it's time to just tell her no. It's not going to work this time and just walk away.
Maybe I'm being mean but even Amani who tends to do whatever she tells her to do said she was beig a bitch. Maybe I just need to cool down...we'll see tommorow what happens.

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  • 10/19/06 2:31 am
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[/bgcolor]As Isabella walked up the stairway leading to the Deans office she took a good look at the marvelous architecture the school had. It seemed everything had a dark gothic feeling to it. The dark wood walls were creepily welcoming to her. The school seemed so familiar but she was sure that she had never stepped inside it before. The halls were empty; all the students lay inside its classrooms with closed doors.
"Isabella? Didn't you hear me? Let's go inside the Deans waiting." She suddenly heard her father say.
"Yeah, I'm sorry your right let go inside." She replied and stepped into the office.
A middle-aged woman greeted them as Dean Channer. Dean Channer was short, and had long silver hair, she reminded Isabella of an elf, or something very similar. Dean Channer searched for Isabella record and stated that she seemed to have no past problems in her other schools. She invited Isabella to the schools swimming and track teams when she noticed Isabella had participated in both at her other schools. She was very tender and caring and it amazingly graceful. However, when it came to rules Dean Channer suddenly became cold and serious.
"We take rules here very seriously. I have no doubt that you will listen to all the rules I give you but be warned that if you ever decide to do something extremely stupid you will no longer be welcomed in my office." She warned, "There are things that rattle my chains and rule breaking is one of them. If you want to be my friend then head this warning."
Isabella just nodded.
"Very well then lets find someone that will be willing to show you your classes."
She grabbed the phone and turned around whispering to the person on the other line. Soon a girl around Isabella age walked in looking a little scared.
"You wanted to see me Dean Channer?" She said perturbed. She then noticed Isabella and gave a weak smile.
"Yes, Kimberly, I wanted to ask you a small favor. Would you be willing to show our new student around? We wouldn't want her to get lost on her first day at school would we?"
"Of course not Dean Channer." Kimberly replied with a small sigh, " I'd be delighted."
She walked out and Isabella followed without hesitation. She smiled at the Dean on her way out and hurried after Kimberly.
"I'm sorry how rude of me," Kimberly said turning around, "My name is Kimberly Abbot, I'm in year twelve. How about you?"
"I'm Isabella Santiago, and I'm in year twelve also. How's life here at Paxton?" She replied trying to keep up the conversation
"It's like living in prison, at least you'll be able to go home at night I presume. I have to stay in the dorms because I live too far away from here. Where are you staying?"
"My family own the Hope and Faith Mansion down by Salem. We just finished renovating it and moved in."
"How cool is that? You could have a major party at that place. Though you must have done a good job renovating it. It was a creepy mess before they started fixing it up. That weird old lady lived in it. She never spoke to anyone. So how were you related?"
"She was my great-aunt, although I never met her. We lived in California before we moved to Salem."
"How cool is that! Well we'll have to finish our talk later here's your first class. Lets get together at lunch and we'll talk more." Kimberly said opening the door for Isabella.
"All right, I'll see you then." She responded with a smile. She walked into her class introduced herself and sat down, ready to start her new class.
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i'll sub if u will # 43 I think I cant keep track of my life sometimes....

  • 10/19/06 2:29 am
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Dom I believe has gone extremely boy crazy not only that but she's majorly into rednecks.....Her boyfriend cheated on her and I think she secretly wants him back. I haver liked him anyways.I think that sometimes we go way to fast in life. I mean how many things change and I don't even freaking notice them. Oh and I think theres this guy in my English class that like me and I dont feel the same way about him. He actually kinda creeps me out....What the heck should I do about that? LOL. Well thats life.
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Tales From Slumber Land.Check it out and tell me waht you think about it.
So I changed my icon thing... I wish new ones would come out I kinda get bored of having the same ones over and over. ANTM is going to be on soon....Last week they took out the girl I wanted. Oh well. Lol. It seems like this episode is going to be interesting. lol. well I'll update asap.[/color][/font]

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