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[bgcolor=black] Better Days  [font=wingdings]«[/font]############## ___________##### ##########T onight's the night... [font=wingdings]nnnnnnnnnn n n n nnn[/font]################## ...the world begins again.####### [font=webdings] ############ggggggggg g g c gg<g [/font] Hay Here is my Audience Participation Story. I thought this may be a cool way to get out a cool story.[box align=right][bgcolor=black] Entry: o2Time: 11:30 PMChapter: o1Subbies: o1 SO! I will write in this as often as I can. I will try to do one chapter a week. Maybe more. I will just continue on the previous entree until I get a chaper done and then I will start a new chaper.When you read a chapter, please respond. I want to know what you think, but please keep your negative comments to a minimum. I greatly appreciate anything that will help me become a better writer, though. Also when you think of something to help the story, respond. Please! I am counting on you to help this story along. I will take the Suggestions and form the story around them. Also any New charachter which you think could help...please dont hesitate to send me a character description.So Go ahead! Read on.###[color=a68fc5][font=wingdings]«[/font][/color] [font=Vivaldi][font=Papyrus][font=monotype corsiva]Katie[/font][/font][/font][bgcolor=3E3E3E][font=webdings] ggg gncg gncg ggggggggggggggggggggg g g ggggggg c g<gg [/font][/bgcolor] CHAPTER o1 Jamie looked out the passenger side window of her mothers '98 Honda Civic and groaned as the car roared to a stop. "Lake View High," her mother read from a huge wooden sign sitting only 20 feet from where Jamie sat. "It doesn't sound to bad." her mother siad with a smile. "You'll make friends in no time at all!" Jamie responded only with a peircing look and turned back just in time to see a group of girls point and laugh. "See! Now they look nice, James!" "MOM! They were laughing at me!" "Oh, I'm sure thats not true! Now goon, say hi!" "Mom, i am not 12 anymore. They were laughing because I am being dropped off at school by my mother!" "Well Whats wrong with that? " "I am a senior in High School, mom. Everyone drives now. Why cant I?" "James, baby, Im just not comfortable with you driving on your own in a new town yet. You dont know the roads yet, you could get lost." "We live a mile away. Im not going to get lost.""We'll talk about it. Right now you better go. You dont want to be late for your first day of school. " Her mother had the same tone as if she was talking about a 4th grader on the first day of school. Jamie looked up at the brick building. "Well, here goes nothing." she whispered to herself as she started walking towards the front entrance. She cluched onto her black and red messanger bag and walked head down into a new world. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ "Just fill out these forms here, and I will give you your schedule when you are finished." Jamie Took the forms that the Attendance Secretary handed to her and sat across the from her desk. As she filled out the forms, Jamie thought of how the classes would be. Would she make easy friends? What about the guys? Were they nice? Good Looking? Single? Jamie Finished the forms and got her schedule along with a map of the campus. She stepped out of the office, and studied the map for a few moments. She then Studied her new schedule. Where was she going? She looked at a clock just above the main office. 8:15 AM. First Block Physics. She looked back at the map. Ok, thats easy enough. she thought, Straight down to the end of the hall, turn left, room 103. She walked into a room filled with about 25 people all in groups of two and three working in lab stations. she looked around the room, and saw the teacher behind her computer. Mr. Bacilli? Jamie said trying to get his attention. What now... Mr. Bacilli stopped in the middle of his sentence as he looked to see Jamie standing there. Oh, you must be the new victim...i mean student. He laughed at his own joke as he shook Jamies Hand. Jamie... Jamie Rhiles. she said. Yes, Rhiles. It says here you came here all the way from Las Vegas. Yes, sir. Jamie said politely. You cant be that polite in Bs Class. Jamie whirled around to face a very tall, very handsome guy. Im Adam. Jamie. she reached out to shake Adams hand. Jamie, Ive asked Adam to be your lab partner for the year so you can acctually have a hope of passing this class. Hes not the smartest in the class but he does his work. Mr. Bacilli said that last part aside to Jamie. Well, we should get started. Adam whet on to explain everything about the class to Jamie. The end of the class came so quickly, Jamie jumped as the bell rang. WO! A little jumpy are we? Adam said with a hand on her shoulder. No, I just didnt expect class to be over. It went so fast. I never knew Physics could be so much fun. Jamie said with a smile. She wasnt sure about his hand on her shoulder, after all she just met him. But a part of her wanted him to not let go. Well Id help you find your next class but I have to be all the was on the other side of campus, but ill see you in lunch. Yea, definatly, Ill be the only one looking scared and confused. Well you can sit with me and my crew. They would like to meet you. OK, thanks! Jamie and Adam waved goodbye as Jamie looked back at her map to find her next class. She slowly walked and looked as not to hold up the traffic in the hall. Just as she was finding he French class on the map, a skinny, blond girl shoved past her. She turned towards Jamie with a scowl. Hmm, new chick, huh? Want a word of advice? Stay away from Adam! Hes Mine! [bgcolor=3E3E3E][font=webdings] ggg gncg gncg ggggggggggggggggggggg g g ggggggg c g<gg [/font][/bgcolor] Jamie: MAIN CHARACTER 17 years old. senior in high school. Blue eyes, Light Light brown hair. Average height and weight. She doesnt think very highly of herself. Just moved across country to New York from just outside Las Vagas 2 months into her senior year.Joan: Jamie's mother. Tries to be cool and hip, but it far off. She tries to treat Jamie as if she was a child. Brown Hair and Green eyes. Moved Jamie across country.Adam: Tall, Dark Handsome. 18 years old. helps Jamie out on her first day.Character: textCharacter: textCharacter: textCharacter: textCharacter: textCharacter: textCharacter: textCharacter: text DrPepperFanatic [bgcolor=3E3E3E][font=webdings] ggg gncg gncg ggggggggggggggggggggg g g ggggggg c g<gg [/font][/bgcolor] Layout [color=#405e95][font=wingdings]«[/font][/color] ©silversafpheir[font=verdana] SilverSafpheir[/font][/user] || Quote [color=#aa70b8][font=wingdings]«[/font][/color] Goo Goo Dolls [/bgcolor]
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[bgcolor=black] Better Days  [font=wingdings]«[/font]############## ___________##### ##########T onight's the night... [font=wingdings]nnnnnnnnnn n n n nnn[/font]################## ...the world begins again.####### [font=webdings] ############ggggggggg g g c gg<g [/font] Hay Here is my Audience Participation Story. I thought this may be a cool way to get out a cool story.[box align=right][bgcolor=black] Entry: o1Time: 11:oo PMChapter: o1Subbies: oo SO! I will write in this as often as I can. I will try to do one chapter a week. Maybe more. I will just continue on the previous entree until I get a chaper done and then I will start a new chaper.When you read a chapter, please respond. I want to know what you think, but please keep your negative comments to a minimum. I greatly appreciate anything that will help me become a better writer, though. Also when you think of something to help the story, respond. Please! I am counting on you to help this story along. I will take the Suggestions and form the story around them. Also any New charachter which you think could help...please dont hesitate to send me a character description.So Go ahead! Read on.###[color=a68fc5][font=wingdings]«[/font][/color] [font=Vivaldi][font=Papyrus][font=monotype corsiva]Katie[/font][/font][/font][bgcolor=3E3E3E][font=webdings] ggg gncg gncg ggggggggggggggggggggg g g ggggggg c g<gg [/font][/bgcolor] CHAPTER o1 Jamie looked out the passenger side window of her mothers '98 Honda Civic and groaned as the car roared to a stop. "Lake View High," her mother read from a huge wooden sign sitting only 20 feet from where Jamie sat. "It doesn't sound to bad." her mother siad with a smile. "You'll make friends in no time at all!" Jamie responded only with a peircing look and turned back just in time to see a group of girls point and laugh. "See! Now they look nice, James!" "MOM! They were laughing at me!" "Oh, I'm sure thats not true! Now goon, say hi!" "Mom, i am not 12 anymore. They were laughing because I am being dropped off at school by my mother!" "Well Whats wrong with that? " "I am a senior in High School, mom. Everyone drives now. Why cant I?" "James, baby, Im just not comfortable with you driving on your own in a new town yet. You dont know the roads yet, you could get lost." "We live a mile away. Im not going to get lost.""We'll talk about it. Right now you better go. You dont want to be late for your first day of school. " Her mother had the same tone as if she was talking about a 4th grader on the first day of school. Jamie looked up at the brick building. "Well, here goes nothing." she whispered to herself as she started walking towards the front entrance. She cluched onto her black and red messanger bag and walked head down into a new world. [bgcolor=3E3E3E][font=webdings] ggg gncg gncg ggggggggggggggggggggg g g ggggggg c g<gg [/font][/bgcolor] Jamie: MAIN CHARACTER 17 years old. senior in high school. Blue eyes, Light Light brown hair. Average height and weight. She doesnt think very highly of herself. Just moved across country from New York to just outside Las Vagas 2 months into her senior year.Joan: Jamie's mother. Tries to be cool and hip, but it far off. She tries to treat Jamie as if she was a child. Brown Hair and Green eyes. Moved Jamie across country.Character: textCharacter: textCharacter: textCharacter: textCharacter: textCharacter: textCharacter: textCharacter: textCharacter: text AUTOMATIC SUBBY LIST [bgcolor=3E3E3E][font=webdings] ggg gncg gncg ggggggggggggggggggggg g g ggggggg c g<gg [/font][/bgcolor] Layout [color=#405e95][font=wingdings]«[/font][/color] ©silversafpheir[font=verdana] SilverSafpheir[/font][/user] || Quote [color=#aa70b8][font=wingdings]«[/font][/color] Goo Goo Dolls [/bgcolor]
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