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In Desperate Need of Criticism

  • 07/20/05 5:33 pm

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Hey Everyone, Well, i'm starting a whole new story, but i'm still working on the other one, it's called Lyon Hotel and i think that it's pretty good for a start, so please check it out and any advice would be helpful, but i need the most help with my first story which has yet to be named it's Untitled at the moment. I need alot of help on it, i'm stuck, i rewrote it and now all i have is part one of chapter one. I would go back to what i had before but i was stupified and deleted it off my disk. I know that was really stupid, but now i'm paying for it, Well, that's all for now, but please help, i would be totally in debt to ya'll.

Links to stories:
Lyon Hotel by: Me
Only Yours by: clm_8907
Untitled by: Me

-Sabrina

BACK FROM CALIFORNIA, NOW AT DAD'S

  • 07/18/05 3:44 pm

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Hey ya'll, its been a while but id been in Cali and was unable to get on the interent. Now i'm at my dad's and well, alot has happened but i can't explain it all so CYA-Sabrina

CALIFORNIA GIRL< MEXICAN HOTTIES< YAHOO!!

  • 07/08/05 5:30 pm

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Sorry it's been a while, i'm in California and couldn't get online, i'm at the library. IT's so AWesome here, i was born here and haven't been here since i was 8 or 9, and i'm 15 so it's been 7 years. Well, Adious. Most of my family is mexican and i'm half mexican so everyone here talks es Spanol. Well, bye again. I passed drivers' ed. and that's all i promise.

DRIVING AND GOING TO CALI!!!

  • 06/29/05 12:53 pm

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HEy, i'm leaving this friday for CALI!! I will be back in Tn the 10th late at night, but it's home and i love it. I had a driving date yesterday, i drove on the actual road with cars and everything, the only thing i have problems with is 10&2, where you hold the steering wheel at. i have one today which i volunteered for and one tomorrow, my last one. Well, CYA.

Click MeThat's my story, i rewrote chapter one and two and today i'll put 3&4, and that's all i have for it.

Chased around with a knife, blast to the past, CRAZY PERSON< Child abuse, getting my thoughts out.

  • 06/18/05 2:32 am

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Last Saturday i baby sat and earned 40$. Wednesday was my first drivers ed date. I only got to drive around my school, but for the first time behind the wheel ever, i did really good, went forwards and backwards around cones and it was awesome, the 28th were driving in Memphis, and the 30 is my last day. i think i'm going to pass. Yeah for me!!\Still gotta get my permit though, wish me luck with the test.

Last night i went to the movies to see Sisterhood movie and this girl i went with like talked alot during the movie. Then she came by this morining to use the phone bcuz her brother was trying to kill her. My mental cousin chased me around with a knife when i was 10 1/2 and i lived. She should have walked to her neighbors or someone closer to her than me. She then said that she doesn't trust the neighbors, but if you were bieng chased around with a knife would you care about that, really? She smells like shit,too. i mean she need to change body wash or actually take a shower. Seriously, i don't if ya'll know anyone like this but she is so annoying, she steals, lies, She is the one person you want nothing to do with, but my mom likes her and she said once that she wished Bailey, the girl's name, was her daughter instead of me. I mean, my mom didn't raise me until i was three. SHe was in the army and married my dad, then got me from my grandparents. I mean, she probably blames me for my biological father leaving her when she was pregnant with me. WOW!! I feel better getting this outta of my system.

Well, alot has happened to me. My mom asked me last night if i cared if Mark, her new boyfriend of a week or two, moved in with us and i said i didn't care, but seriously, i think my mom is a slut. I can't really explain it, but you'd have to see how she acts. It's like she thinks she's better than everyone. When her and my dad divorced she didn't eat for weeks, and she went from 115 to 98# and when i don't eat because i'm not hungry, she goes and says, Sabrina your small enough all ready, don't be like me. I was like what the fuck? i didn't tell her that, she wouldv'e slapped me harder than usual, and i didn't want my lip busted open again, and it happens everytime i get slapped. I have enough bruises from her, so i kept my mouth shut for once.

Wednesday when her friends were over, she just couldn't help but talk about how a child welfare lady talked to me, and yada yada blah blah blah! It's a very complicated story, and i guess you can tell why i hate my mom. It's a complicated story. It should be a movie. Maybe one day. Luv ya bunches,
Cya soon.-Sabrina