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Candy Hearts

Remember...?

Written by: Sarah D., Reporter – Posted: Wed Dec 26th, 2001
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From the Kiwi-Vaults...enjoy!

Originally posted on Valentine's Day in 2002



I told you to give it up, didn't I? I asked you over and over. I love you. You needed help; I was here to give it but you just dismissed it. I knew it wouldn't be easy; why do you think I stayed with you for so long? I thought you could do it, but I guess I was wrong. Remember the candy hearts we always played with on Valentine's Day? Sure, you do. There is no way you could have forgotten them. You made me a story with them like we did when we were in second grade. "Fax Me," that was always our favorite. And that one time when that girl blew you off, before all of this, you came to me and we made a voodoo doll then flicked the candies at her. I had you forgetting about her in a matter of hours. Now you just turn to some substance.

You know it is truly is amazing you are alive. I wished you had listened to us. Your mom, your sister, even my little brother who you know isn't that little anymore. I'll never forget when he used to follow you through our house when we were in 8th grade and he was only in 5th. He loved you. Quite possibly more than I do. No, impossible. I love you more than anyone. I love you more than anything. We were supposed to be best friends forever. Just like those necklaces we used to have of the hearts that were split into two puzzle pieces.
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that was aaaamazing you should definetly write more your definetly
talented
this is great brought tears to my eyes i know how they feel when
you lose a best friend
wow the description just is so great. i loved it!!
o my god that is such a sad story
i wanna cry it's so realistic it's scary
Totally not what I expected with the Valentines Day candies. o_O
Very nicely done! <3
that was AMAZING. you're an extremely talented writer...its
realistic and emotional... i loved it! it was so sad
wow. the first page i was like okay yeah sad but whatever. but
the last paragraph gave me tears.
:(
That was so freakin sad! oh gosh i would absolutely die if that
ever happened to me! wow....
I'm going to go bawl now.... That is so sad! But so true!
that is so deep-it's cute tho!!
it is so real and in such a small space.

the last paragraph really got to me. it was a mix of reality and
dreams, you know? that's just a cool mix.
wowzers... that's really sad, i want to cry now. :'[
that makes me want to cry, and think how i would react if it
happened to me.
Thats so true.... "Love stinks, than you die" :(
Year of the pig. Oink oink
wow, intense ending especially for such a short story.
Wow I just cant say anything bacause it makes you want to cry.
intense
That was so good. Please keep writing.
that was great the best writing ive read on kiwi. plz write more
omg that was really good.
omg wow ur so gd at writing it touches u inside.
i really did like it... its great
I LOVED IT .
that was really sad. i started getting all teary.
you are a really good writer.
:-(
wow, that was the best kiwi story that I have read in a long time.
That's an awesome story! I guess writing stays good no matter what
year it is! How sad.
That was beautiful, depressing, and extremely touching. Write
more. -Drools.- Must... have... more...


-VK
don't u dare ever give up writing that was great. it reminded me
so much of one of my best friends, i swear i was sobbing for 20
minutes after i read it, and i never cry. when you love somebody
that much, and lose them, uh! i can't even explain how much that
hurts, that was wonderful, keep on!
that was sooo sad...i almost cried. u have sum EXTREME talent!
wow... that was really amazing. it was very descriptive, and i
could feel it. awesome work.
That was such a good story. I think that I'm gonna go cry now...
It's so sad...
this was so well written and the message was so powerful. keep up
the good work :)
Sarah...sweety you have some SERIOUS talent...
I liked that story! It had a VERY good message backing it up! I
like the whole idea with the heart candies... that was cute. But
good job! It was very well written!!

katie :0)
aww im sorry but if thats true some of these storys are jus made
up to set a point across but thats too sad for me * sniff sniff*
tissues please
so much in so little I need my kleenexs
i'm gonna cry !!! no... honestly i am!!!
that is so sad! good writing, though.
Wow! This is an awesome, moving story. Great job. Now I have to
go cry... :(

God Bless,
Jamie
that was a powerful message and the way you wrote it like you were
talking to that guy was unique and the details and descriptions
really added to it. it was sad as anything, but it reflected life
for a lot of people! good job!
that was so beautiful, so sad... good job coz it was so
well-written... *sigh* another v-day story. there's 6 more days
left, and i still don't have that someone special. lol. oh,
well, guess i'll just be kickin' it with my peeps at school. your
story is yet another reminder of how we should not take things for
granted, in a sense, and that we should appreciate all that we
have. not only on v-day, or on x-mas, but every day!
omg this was sad!!
that is the saddest story yet.

AWWWWWWWWWWW...TEARS......
how sad. =(
that's so sad! it was wonderfully written, it reaches out the the
reader... aww... no....
so sad!!! awsomw tho
GREat writting sad story applauds with kleenex

Oh my gosh..that's so sad....almost getting me teary..look what
you did!! Ha ha ha
Oh my god....I cried! I loved it...Check out mine - "Falling"

~*~Tig~*~
that was so sad...
that was so sad, amazingly good though! yay. it made me cry.
THAS WAS AWESOME.......BUT SO SAD.....SNIFFLE
Oh my God, that was really great! This is coming from a fellow
writer, that is really a great story, very original. Keep it up!

>*Lauren*<
Aww, that's sad... =( *sniffleS*